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Stairway to Darkness
Contributed by
Nezenic
on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:35:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Stairway to darkness
Lead the way to night
And never wake up
Never find the light
Gasping for air
Cutting without care
Deep breathing cry
Climbing stair to stair
Wondering why
Sharp and faithful friend
Let me find my sleep
And never wake up
Find the darkest deep
Blinded by light
Shrieking for my rite
Press hard the knife
Disgusted by sight
Bleed dry my life
Stairway to darkness
Lead the way to night
Copyright ©
Nezenic
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2004-10-26 14:35:10]
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Re: Stairway to Darkness
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:46:24 PM AEST
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Grim and painful, but a really excellent piece. I love the rhyme style.
May your road rise up.
Andrew |
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Re: Stairway to Darkness
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by screwup on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 04:52:13 PM AEST
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you did a great job... keep writing out your pain.
~screwup |
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Re: Stairway to Darkness
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 05:32:12 PM AEST
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| I'll comment another day..my best friend died today..well yesterday really..and I hate death too much to comment today but I wanted you to know I stopped by for a read at least~ bear. |
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