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Fold
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:32:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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My eyes are folded
Insecure and curroded
Pulled across the table
I am by far unstable
Talking for hours
About your nothing
I would like to dream
But I fold my eyes
I would love your sceen
But that's not me
I will
I will wait long time
Long after
I die
Just to be
Just to be
What you wanted me to be
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2004-10-26 14:32:32]
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Re: Fold
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:09:54 PM AEST
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Luv your creative writing.
Verry deep.
awesome work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Fold
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by candysears on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 07:44:21 PM AEST
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| Great write...Very creativeAnd deep...God Bless! |
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