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My eternal sunshine
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:23:03 PM in AEST
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I don't want to close the door tonight, I don't want to sleep this endless sleep alone.
I don't want the knife to tear a hole, I don't want the pain to feel so good.
The room is dark, the room is empty - a girl sits behind a door.
The sad song plays, the Rubik cube solves itself, the girl cries.
I have my knife, I have my empty hollow feeling - I am alone.
There's a better place for us, we find it in ourselves... we realise, we give up.
The hurt cuts to deep and all is lost.
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Re: My eternal sunshine
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:32:01 PM AEST
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i know this feeling so well....i know how much it sux....excellent job....great write
Lots of Love
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Re: My eternal sunshine
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:32:18 PM AEST
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| Excellent write... Very sad. |
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Re: My eternal sunshine
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by Nezenic on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:42:03 PM AEST
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| A feeling that many people know about... you may have written this poem about yourself, but it's really about a lot of people. |
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