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Doubtful-Hopeless-Needy
Contributed by
lovesucks
on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 11:59:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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You lied
You decieved
You almost achieved
Your ultimate goal
To put me 6ft deep in a hole
I wanted to shrivel up and die
Every part of me hurting so deep inside
No hopes of redeemtion, still truths I dare not mention
Nobody will understand these thoughts
Nobody will see the battles I've endlessy fought
They will all snicker and laugh
As soon as I turn my back
At those depths of hell
Nobody was there when I fell
They pretend everythings okay
I don't believe anything they say
Because as loving, caring and strong as I am
I can't quit and I don't see how they can
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lovesucks
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2004-10-26 11:59:58]
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Re: Doubtful-Hopeless-Needy
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by screwup on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 12:06:04 PM AEST
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sad poem... but good, keep writing and telling others of your pain...
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Re: Doubtful-Hopeless-Needy
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by SuchGreatHeights on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:46:50 PM AEST
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| good piece, good flow. i know exactly how you feel man, i hope good things come your way. peace |
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