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Oppsites
Contributed by
skyblumoon
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Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 11:21:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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"Opposites"
I'm critical of others...
You're nice to everyone...
Were opposites...
But I'm learning to except others as they are...
You're as gentle as a feather..
.I'm as hard as concrete...
Were opposites...
But I'm learning to soften soul...
You're as warm as a fire...
I'm as cold as ice...
Were opposites...
But I'm learning to melt my frigid heart...
You're as deep as the ocean...
I'm as shallow as a stream...
Were opposites...
But I'm gaining some depth...
I'm mean as a Pit Bull...
You're as kind as a Preacher...
Were opposites...
But I'm learning self-control...
You're as soft-spoken as a child...
I'm as loud as a wrestler...
Were opposites...
But I'm getting quieter every-day...
I'm to demanding...
You're too easy...
Were opposites...
But I'm learning some manners...
You're too affectionate...
I'm too reserved...
Were opposites...
But sometimes I'm willing to bend...
I want all the control...
You want an equal partnership...
Were opposites...
But I'm learning to share...
You're moving towards the future...
I'm trapped in the past...
Were opposites...
But some days I try to move on...
We maybe opposites...
But we have the love we share in common...
Were both grateful for the other...
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2004-10-26 11:21:37]
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Re: Oppsites
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by izzy on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:36:16 PM AEST
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A very honest poem, but your being a little to hard on your self from the sounds of it. You might want to lighten up a bit. But it is a good poem.
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Re: Oppsites
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:46:20 AM AEST
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good poem!
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