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I Hear My Name Called Again and Again
Contributed by
iamteddies
on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I hear my name called again and again
by one maybe two or three
beckoning persistently,gentle breeze unfeinged
soothing me
the waves also at shore join the calls
pleading and crying
creating an ache to penetrate walls
sweet,urgent,searing
disolving my will and body of substance
as I follow
the sound of hope in the distance
becoming hollow
I search and search and weep
for the unsearchable
tired and drained I long for leep
now irristable
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iamteddies
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2002-11-17 20:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Hear My Name Called Again and Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:56:25 PM AEST (User
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you have a pretty sketchy rhythmn in this. your have fantastic rhyme though. |
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