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Twisted Heaven
Contributed by
Ryoko
on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:22:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Buried hearts in soiled people,
Being the one you chose,
Depressive moads heads collapse,
Black blood pooled around my feet.
Corrodes bring back memories,
I treated you like *****,
Guilties moronic water passes me,
Never ever reaching my throat.
Suffer my fate alone,
red eyes close around me,
silent questions of lonliness overtake,
Realisations nailed to my back.
Painful resolutions concreted nails,
I'll be here...' waiting '...for you,
nightshaded strands paint my face,
You dont want to save my conscience.
White translucent rules are written,
Smudged ink with printed names,
dialogue completely forgotten,
contrasting lies strive for death.
Dreading perfect life's sincerity,
Confused suicide drawn out prolonging,
Smiles of blood dance on my face,
and so welcome to my twisted heaven.
Copyright ©
Ryoko
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2004-10-26 09:22:10]
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Re: Twisted Heaven
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:39:52 AM AEST
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Amazing write. Well-chosen, Well-woven words...Looking forward to hearing more!
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Re: Twisted Heaven
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by skyblumoon on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 11:26:19 AM AEST
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Very dark and powerful. Great write.
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