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My World Of Emptiness
Contributed by
iamteddies
on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Yesterday all feeling missing
I escaped to a world of emptiness
Hidden from vicious creatures hissing
A distant chant to the beat of a guess
My icy hot chest is more than seared
Chanters keep me hostile guest
This haunted place holds all I feared
The three tongued creature leads the rest
This is where my fears are mirrored
So unreal to people blessed
My eyes are wide with secret tears
As I escape to my world of emptiness.
Copyright ©
iamteddies
... [
2002-11-17 20:30:00]
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Re: My World Of Emptiness
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_Angel_BabAy on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 03:50:46 AM AEST
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| Good poem I know how you feel. |
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Re: My World Of Emptiness
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by iamteddies on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 03:53:38 PM AEST
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| Thanks Dark_Angel_BabAy |
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Re: My World Of Emptiness
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by iamteddies on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 03:56:05 PM AEST
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