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Bad Trip
Contributed by
blossomingcherry5353
on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:35:31 PM in AEST
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Your egocentric dictatorship running my life into a bad trip.
What's your problem with me, can't help it if i bleed, only human,
can not sleep.
Bad trip dreams consuming me.
All I hear is your malicious laugh echoing through my mind.
Stalking into the night, my mind full of fright.
Do I deserve this pain?
Am I going insane?
What's with you running my life?
Exploding problem that I need to fight.
Frustration on my mind.
Something that my eye's just can't hide.
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blossomingcherry5353
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2004-10-25 21:35:31]
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Re: Bad Trip
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:54:37 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: Bad Trip
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:14:24 PM AEST
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this is a really good write.. I enjoyed it alot.. it gives you sort of the feeling someone is haunting you that did something bad that you can't escape from them even in your sleep.. great job
Peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Bad Trip
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:28:00 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Bad Trip
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:05:37 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem! |
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Re: Bad Trip
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by polishkiss on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:30:46 AM AEST
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| u r right. this poem is so right, the words really spoke to me. thanks for suggesting it. read ur other work its really good to . |
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