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BrOkEN
Contributed by
x0xLoStGiRLx0x
on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 08:37:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How Could you do this
Why don't you care
You told me that you would always be there
All that we went through
All of those times
The memories just hang in my mind
You told me you loved me
I believed you
You lied to me
I never decieved you
You Promised me everything
But now you leave me nothing
But a broken heart because of you
You could say that your sorry
Or give me one last friendly kiss
Theres so many things about you
that i can't help but miss
My life has been fading slowly
My heart feels so cold
I can't feel your touch anymore
Your image seems so old
I can't listen to a slow song
Or look at another guy
All i can think about
is how i thought you would never lie
I could kill myself now for believing you
It would be so much more easy
I look at you and i turn to ice
Even when the air is just breezy
I can't believe you can forget me like that
And ignore me as much as you do
I'm strong enough now
I'll never shed one more aching tear over you
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x0xLoStGiRLx0x
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2004-10-25 20:37:48]
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Re: BrOkEN
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by Stonedraider23 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 08:51:34 PM AEST
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| i like this i felt the same all but the other guy thing but yea very good |
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Re: BrOkEN
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:27:10 PM AEST
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| It's beautiful. I loved it and felt everyword. |
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Re: BrOkEN
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by marsh62287 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:28:43 PM AEST
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| very good poem |
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Re: BrOkEN
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by lanna047 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 11:53:28 PM AEST
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| Oh wow, this is a great write. So strongly expressing how this guy hurt you. I, unfortunately, feel your pain. I hope it gets better for you soon. |
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Re: BrOkEN
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 01:52:03 AM AEST
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| very emotional great write |
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