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SUICIDE NOTE
Contributed by
thepoet
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 07:29:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I've decided to take my life.
Cut my wrists with a real sharp knife.
Set in the tub towatch the blood drain.
Rapidly from the now cut vein.
As each beat of my heart comes and goes.
So does my life.
Soon the pain and suffering will be gone.
Life for me has been a sad song.
Nothing right everything wrong.
I must go the time is near.
Please dont be sad dont shed a tear.
Copyright ©
thepoet
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2004-10-25 19:29:47]
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Re: SUICIDE NOTE
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by teagy03 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 07:31:20 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel. A great poem, short and to the point. Well done. |
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Re: SUICIDE NOTE
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 08:44:14 PM AEST
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| powerful and excellently written poem. there is no good/bad no right/wrong only thinking makes it so. |
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Re: SUICIDE NOTE
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by emystar on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 08:57:47 PM AEST
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Very heart wrenching write.I pray this is jus writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: SUICIDE NOTE
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:25:03 PM AEST
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Sad write. Good though. I can relate a lot to this. Suicide isn't the right choice, I've almost died from trying to commit suicide. It's not very pleasant. PM me if you want to talk.
Spazzo |
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Re: SUICIDE NOTE
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by Apardame on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:58:55 AM AEST
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| To a lot of people, suicide is the only way out. The only way to get away from the pain. I understand how you feel. Great Write!!! |
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