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From you
Contributed by
discantbelife
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 05:09:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
poets
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I started writing to get some help but I
Need some kind of direction from
You to help me out in this poetry thing
To be the best in all that i do i have to
Be better at what i do.
There is times when i want to quit
For reason beyond what i can explain but for
Me though this is my life.
So from you i ask, to read each word of every line
Copyright ©
discantbelife
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2004-10-25 17:09:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: From you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 06:13:50 PM AEST (User
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Very clever. Good write. A plea within a plea. This was a very
creative effort!
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Re: From you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:36:56 PM AEST (User
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fantastic write. |
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