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Never Let Go
Contributed by
immortal_pain
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:36:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Shipped into the waters
an ocean big and deep
left there to tauter
there the children weep
time consuming past revealing
and resuming
ocean’s stealing.....
children’s souls so fragile
left just an empty shell
no feeling or emotion
life’s a living hell
when stranded on the ocean
such a bitter thing
an ocean full of pain
so cold and unforgiving
one can never gain......
present is horrid
cause time never stands still
like a horror story
the ocean can kill
acrimonious beauty
that never lets go
tis an oceans duty
an oceans low
tears flow from there cheeks
children die
and children weep
it waves gripping your arms
yanking you out of your boat
taking you down.....
It never lets go.............
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immortal_pain
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2004-10-25 16:36:57]
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Re: Never Let Go
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:26:20 PM AEST
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| now this my fiendish little friend is poetry. 5 stars and a shrunken head for you. |
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Re: Never Let Go
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:42:45 PM AEST
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| amazing. much reason to be proud of this one. |
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Re: Never Let Go
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by immortal_pain on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 04:48:49 PM AEST
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| teheh thanks so much yall ^_^ |
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Re: Never Let Go
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 05:17:18 PM AEST
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I really liked the images.
Very cool.
--Mothy |
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