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Let Me Seduce You
Contributed by
AliB
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 03:27:04 PM in AEST
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Sensual and rhythmic
Watch me work the floor
Receptive to my advances
I’ll leave you wanting more
My hands caress your body
Moving slowly up and down
Massaging gently
I have your full attention now
Kissing you all over
I run my fingers through your hair
Curiosity has won you over
Awakening a passion so rare
Making love to you, so easy
I really had you fooled
I’ll move on to my next victim
Seduction overruled!
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AliB
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2004-10-25 15:27:04]
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Re: Let Me Seduce You
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 03:38:53 PM AEST
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| very good. The words flow together and kinda paint a picture. Nice work :) |
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Re: Let Me Seduce You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:03:48 PM AEST
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lmao, I like this one. Its gentle, beautiful and flows perfectly. Though it sounds like the typical thoughts of a man... but why should they have all the fun?
Great Write
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Let Me Seduce You
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:43:56 PM AEST
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like a seductive dance, whoo whoo ali, lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Let Me Seduce You
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:04:34 AM AEST
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eh up this is a bit ranchy!!!!!
Great poem, love the imagery it really paints a picture, got anything to do with you going out saturday night???????? LMAO
Excelleny poe, really liked it, more more more
love Dawny x |
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Re: Let Me Seduce You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:43:14 AM AEST
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Well Ali! ( clasps hands to cheeks and opens mouth in shock like a fish out of water!) all i can say is lock up your sons!
good writing.
johnny. |
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Re: Let Me Seduce You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 05:40:10 PM AEST
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Ali, this was GREAT!! I was so enraptured by it.
Right up to the last stanza. Then I was LMAO!!!
EXCELLENT twist.
Brilliant, brilliant, BRILLIANT I tell you!
Genius, I say!
~Breezy
*still laughing*
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Re: Let Me Seduce You
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by Bruce on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 06:33:19 AM AEST
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| loved it |
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