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Deaths Grain Of Sand
Contributed by
parkman
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:08:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Force that knife, deep into my heart
Twist it around, tear it apart
See me bleed, the deeper you shove
Destroying a heart, so full of love
Take my soul, bury it deep
See the pain, my body does seep
Hear my sorrow, I scream and cry
Today the biggest part of me, does die
Take my life, it’s putty in your hands
Leave me in shreds, deaths grain of sand
You can take them all, leaving just a stain
But the love in my heart, will always remain
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-10-25 14:08:58]
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Re: Deaths Grain Of Sand
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by a_bear on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:34:20 PM AEST
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| Just knowing you're in Scotland..I'll say it's a bonny poem no matter what I really think..lol. however, the truth is, I really did like it. a lo' |
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Re: Deaths Grain Of Sand
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:56:55 PM AEST
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And a good poem it is..
Tells the truth about how alot of ppl stab u and then leave u to bleed...
Cause they don't seem to care at all...
Good write... parkman... keep it up!
~Donna~ |
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