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The Zoo
Contributed by
footiebabe
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:08:53 PM in AEST
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I went for a day trip to the Zoo
There were tigers, lions and monkeys too
I walked around for about an hour
And then I saw gorilla power
He slammed his cage in angry fear
I think we better get out of here!!!!
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Re: The Zoo
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by AliB on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:18:00 PM AEST
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Brilliant!!
Michelle, that was really good, made me giggle at the end. You've certainly got a special talent, me and your mum had better watch out, we're gonna get jealous lol.
Keep em coming,
Love Ali xx |
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Re: The Zoo
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by Clementine on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:38:57 PM AEST
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| *laughs* I love it! I love the zoo, and I know about the angry gorilla! haha. Cute write. :) |
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Re: The Zoo
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by sammydid on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:50:37 PM AEST
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the zoo? i love the zoo! once we went for a school trip and i was almost bitten by a giraffe! it was fun. so is your poem!
-natalie |
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Re: The Zoo
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by Dawny on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 01:49:22 PM AEST
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Wow!!
This is your best yet, great poem Michelle..made me giggle lol
Love Dawny xxx |
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Re: The Zoo
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by Trisha on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:57:57 AM AEST
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| I Love The Zoo. I Injoy Reading This. |
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Re: The Zoo
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by Trisha on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:05:26 AM AEST
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| I Love The Zoo. I Injoy Reading This. |
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