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na
Contributed by
sidra
on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:06:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Easily he dives
in the darkest blue,
deeply beyond me,
I follow but am lost,
floating in unknown,
compressed densely,
and out of breath,
surrendered to him,
and to oblivion...
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sidra
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2004-10-25 12:06:17]
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Re: na
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by sammydid on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 01:03:42 PM AEST
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this is a great poem! i can feel the water pressing down, the confusion of being lost and giving up.
-natalie |
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Re: na
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by blacksabbath026 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 12:28:39 AM AEST
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| weird but good |
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Re: na
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by Arsenic on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:55:14 AM AEST
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| Very good. Kind of depressing though. Who is he? |
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