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The Little Things
Contributed by
stoney1
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:18:41 AM in AEST
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The warmth of your smile
on me has the same affect
as the sun's soft rays
encouraging the May flower
to unfold its delicate petals
When you reach up
to adjust my tie,
I am content in
the knowledge that
you regard me as
your very own
The softness of your lips
brushing against my cheek
as you send me off
to face the day,
re-affirms that I am
your one true love...
or...at least until
the milkman comes
Stoney 25 Oct '04
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stoney1
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2004-10-25 09:18:41]
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Re: The Little Things
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by Stitch on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:01:19 AM AEST
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This got me...I was all caught up in the moment and then had to chuckle a little.
Cute.
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Re: The Little Things
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 11:18:20 AM AEST
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You rat, I was enjoying the honesty of your caring that she cares and then BAM you got me! This was sute.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: The Little Things
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by Sirena_Degana on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 11:20:06 AM AEST
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Me and my friend amanda agree..WE LOVE THE LAST LINE..but hopefully she's not a lecher..woot! don't worry about that...
blessed be
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Re: The Little Things
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 01:28:07 PM AEST
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Aw shucks, stoney1 - you got me too! My mind was turning, turning on the thought of how much can be embedded in the smallest of moments... and then, whammo! you toss the milkman in. *sigh*
Wanting to believe she tells the milkman to get lost-
SNM |
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Re: The Little Things
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:45:24 PM AEST
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Nice touch at the end. Good job.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: The Little Things
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:58:33 PM AEST
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lol I was all tied up in the lovey part then hit the end a great poem with a nice twist
Michelle |
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Re: The Little Things
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:52:53 PM AEST
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| i love the last line, it made me chuckle. i love the structure as well. a great poem. |
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