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A Slow Dance in Open Flame
Contributed by
paper-heart-hero
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:20:51 AM in AEST
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In this coffin made for two
I’m getting used to missing you
And all the victims we burned away
We were romance, suicide
We would slow dance as we die inside
Till tomorrow became yesterday
Now you’re gone and the pictures remain
No more holding on, no more living this way
Please say you understand
Please say you understand
I’ll be waiting for you right here
Always
The more I scream I feel it less
Like your fingers wrapped around my neck
I say I love you, you say goodbye
Sweet nothings from sweet no ones
The comfort as we come undone
Like the tears of a long goodnight
Please say you understand
Please say you understand
I’ll be waiting for you right here
Right here always
And as my last breath
Makes its way from my chest
Please remember this
Your name tonight
Like every night
Is the last word to fall from my lips my lips
Please say you understand
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Re: A Slow Dance in Open Flame
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by NickNamed on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 03:29:19 AM AEST
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the imagry is there, but as a reader I'm left searching
I hate to critisize this type, because it probably means much more to the author
Lyrics are a fraction of a song,,, wish I could hear the music. |
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Re: A Slow Dance in Open Flame
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by little_genna on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 05:12:07 AM AEST
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With the right music this song would be totally amazing.
As just Lyrics it is still excellent.
Holds alot of emotion and you have expressed it in such a way I love it.
Take care
Gen xx |
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Re: A Slow Dance in Open Flame
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by jaeann on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 06:28:54 PM AEST
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| as always....with your lyrics....you've created front row groupies!!!!! |
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Re: A Slow Dance in Open Flame
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:44:05 PM AEST
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| Amazing, as all your writes are. Would love to hear them with music. |
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Re: A Slow Dance in Open Flame
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:35:58 AM AEST
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touching write
Michelle |
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