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This Someone Is Me... Part 2
Contributed by
mylastwords
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Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 01:39:26 AM in AEST
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oops
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Her heart has been chipped,
Many a time before...
But its never been been this broken...
This Crushed...
Shattered into a million pieces...
Never will it be the same...
Unless someone comes to piece it back together...
Very gently...
Very slowly...
But when will he come...?
Will it be soon enough...?
I don't think so...
Never will he come...
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Re: This Someone Is Me... Part 2
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by NickNamed on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 03:56:45 AM AEST
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the voice has hope, yet tries to convince herself there is none.
expresses how the voice is coming to terms with the past, yet cannot leave it
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Re: This Someone Is Me... Part 2
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 01:53:52 PM AEST
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in this...you seem confused. hopeful, yet not.
"But when will he come...?
Will it be soon enough...?"
^^sounds hopeful^^
"I don't think so...
Never will he come..."
^this sounds the opposite of hopeful^
anyway, i like it. it's short & sweet, yet still full of emotion
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