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dancing with a stranger
Contributed by
bonewiz326
on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:38:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If it weren't for your smile, I'd be a wallflower again,
This corner is cold and your smile is so warm,
The lights are turned down low, but I can still see your eyes,
Look at me stranger, and lets dance away the night,
Take me with your wonder and your mystery,
Heart race a beat or two, lifted now to surprise,
A connection of ignorance, one night hope, and fairy tail,
Perchance meeting, accident of fate, introduction to be,
The aura of this meeting ma'am,
is overwhelming to me,
and I wish I knew what to say,
Not before happened to,
out on an empty floor,
dancing with a stranger in this way,
Music is the writer, of a story never told,
Our feet are the painter, moving across the floor,
Beat of rhythm to beat this place, beat odds to beat perchance,
Guess its okay, hold you a little tighter,
Shy to your eyes, shy to look, shy to meet your stare,
Hope to heart, hope to mind, hope to show just who I am,
Place to be, a place to see, a place so different,
A moment find, a moment frozen, a moment so unreal,
The aura of this meeting ma'am,
is overwhelming to me,
and I wish I knew what to say,
Not before happened to,
out on an empty floor,
dancing with a stranger in this way,
Just take one damn moment, to think about this time,
Think about the reason your in my arms,
And just take one damn look, to see into my eyes,
To wonder who i am, inside,
The aura of this meeting ma'am,
is overwhelming to me,
and I wish I knew what to say,
Not before happened to,
out on an empty floor,
dancing with a stranger in this way,
i'm dancing with a stranger,
in this way.
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bonewiz326
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2004-10-24 22:38:09]
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Re: dancing with a stranger
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by TheRaven on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:20:52 PM AEST
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Wow....what an awesome write. Just amazing. Absolutely great. Keep it up, loved it...be excellent
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Re: dancing with a stranger
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:54:10 PM AEST
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| Intense and beautiful, very visual and powerful, an awesome poem and excellent write. |
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Re: dancing with a stranger
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 01:17:13 AM AEST
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*applauds enthusiastically*
Love it. I could tell from the first line that this was going to be a poem worth reading, and the rest didn't disappoint at all. The second, fourth, and fifth stanzas were especially resplendent, but really it was all just amazing. Yours is a pen that should never cease writing, and I can't say better.
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