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The Message Sent
Contributed by
AsILayDying
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:21:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We are the calm before the storm
We are the lighthouse off somber shores
We are the final breath before defeat
We are the cure when your bones grow weak
We are the composure upon waking terrible dreams
We are the familar face in the most novel scenes
We are the photographs when you can't remember
We are the flames in the cold of December
I am the messenger, here's your letter
I've carried around for you, one year later
I still feel the same, I still feel the same
Copyright ©
AsILayDying
... [
2004-10-24 22:21:24]
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Re: The Message Sent
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:26:46 PM AEST
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| I really like what you have so far...keep working I'd like to read the finsihed piece! |
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Re: The Message Sent
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 01:27:09 AM AEST
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Whoa . . . I'm absolutely loving this so far. Like the comment above says, I'd like to see the end result, too. This is already jawdroppingly eloquent and I can't wait to see what it'll look like upon completion. And I love the transition from "we" to "I". Truly great.
--Nora |
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Re: The Message Sent
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by a_bear on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:25:38 AM AEST
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| wish I could hear this.. |
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