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It hurts all the time
Contributed by
gurlg0newr0ng
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:38:06 PM in AEST
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LoveRemembered
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You hurt me when you met me, little did I know
and you hurt me when you left me, but I had to let u go
It hurts me when I see you now walking on the street
It cuts just like a knife but instead of blood it's tears that leak
It hurts at just one thought of you, no matter how big or small
It hurts that your always on my mind, can't stop the pain at all
No matter what I do it hurts, no cure to ease my mind
It hurts me in the day the night, it hurts me all the time
It hurts, it hurts, it hurts, what more can I say?
And you're the onely one who can take this pain away
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2004-10-24 21:38:06]
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Re: It hurts all the time
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by irishgirl812 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:01:14 PM AEST
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| great writing, i like this alot, keep it up |
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Re: It hurts all the time
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by surge_joebot on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 02:29:02 AM AEST
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i know it hurts... that was a very good poem... it's always more powerful and more effective when you repeat words, it's hard to do, but you pulled it off well.
cheers
demelza |
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Re: It hurts all the time
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by Trisha on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 10:48:13 PM AEST
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| good poem |
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