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free to fall
Contributed by
monophobic
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:25:30 PM in AEST
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oops
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i think the world should know
its okay to make stupid mistakes
everyone does it
i think my parents should know
its okay to not be perfect
nobody really is
i think my friends should know
im sorry for all the times i've hurt you guys
i love you all so much
and i think i should know
its okay to fall
it makes it worth the drop
once i stand up again
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2004-10-24 21:25:30]
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Re: free to fall
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:48:57 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. you left out a word though in your 8th verse. |
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Re: free to fall
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:46:43 PM AEST
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Good write...and ever better advice...
Jenni |
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