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Depressed Again
Contributed by
Jamals_babie_gurl_69
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:15:45 PM in AEST
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It's been a bad day I'm getting used to it now another sad day I'd cry but I dunno how I'm drowning in thoughts of how things used to be my chest was shut tight complete w/ purity It's out in the open should've kept to myself I'll learn from mistakes take my heart off the shelf my soul has now fled it's my body alone and it's far too much hurt for my heart to come home I give it up now there's no way to win w/o you here my world still spins It's been a bad day I'll try to let it not show another sad day and I'm just letting go....
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Re: Depressed Again
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:27:20 PM AEST
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good write. "its hard to hold on when youre reaching for so much more" -crossfade
if you let go, remember you will never get above where you fell from... |
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Re: Depressed Again
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:37:48 AM AEST
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| awesome poem, so full of heartache, and falling feelings, depression an be a harsh taskmaster, seen many fall under its agonising chains, hope that you find a way to beat it, take care always. |
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Re: Depressed Again
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:43:20 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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