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LivinNaDream
Contributed by
gurlg0newr0ng
on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:15:30 PM in AEST
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She lays there alone and cryz
Inside little by little she dyez
As she tryz to fall asleep
She weeps
Not yet secure in her dreams
life scary and impossible it seemz
but just as her mind begins to drift
through all the pain and suffering sifts
and rushes to the core
Then she's lost in dreamz of him to hurt no more
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2004-10-24 21:15:30]
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Re: LivinNaDream
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 07:50:42 AM AEST
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| Short, sweet & sad. Very good write......Mike |
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Re: LivinNaDream
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by Unspoken_Love on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:06:27 PM AEST
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| I thought this was a really good poem, even though it's so short you still get the feelings across great. good job |
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