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Eternally Alive

Contributed by macmcgovern on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:04:21 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

Golden tendrils light the way,
glisten against the gate open wide,
outpour the angels, into the galaxy,
speeding along on celestial tide,
search for souls, some coming alive,
search for souls, recently died

Those coming alive, confused, cry,
remember no past, trapped in new life,
unsure the future, how long it will last,
comes an angel, to watch over and protect,
to remain and comfort until last breath,
then to guide a worthy soul,
into the loving light, of eternal life

Those recently died, conscience stricken,
scream with fear, have no past,
trapped in everlasting night,
an angel, long departed, returns,
to give testimonial, of one,
who cared more for life,
than the warmth and comfort, of the light,
will now guide an unworthy soul,
into eternal blackness, and never ending misery

Golden tendrils light the day,
the gate, gently sways, then closes all the way,
the angels return, into the realm of God's eye,
souls eternally alive

Mac
October 2004

Copyright © macmcgovern ... [ 2004-10-24 21:04:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Eternally Alive (User Rating: 1 )
by Clementine on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:07:18 AM AEST
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Beautiful writing...very descriptive...I always like writing that I can "feel", and this is one of them...good job!

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