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Untitled
Contributed by
Clementine
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:56:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Blissfully serene.
Sweet reverie.
Warm rays of radiance blinds me.
Sugar coated honey kisses.
Feeling the grass grow
between my toes.
Graciously falling into a cascade
of whimsical beauty.
Skipping stones across the pond.
Watching the ripples meander
out towards the distance.
A blanket of daisies covers me.
Sweet nectarous sustenance.
Copyright ©
Clementine
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2004-10-24 20:56:57]
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Re: Untitled
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by Esther on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:41:39 PM AEST
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Hey! I liked it a lot- very descriptive with nice adjectives very imaginative- and best of all it flows.
keep on writing!!
-esther
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Re: Untitled
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:33:03 AM AEST
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| Such a beautiful poem, mezmerising and eloquent, with very visual images of natures wonderful beauty, cool write awesome to be able to read, from such masterful talent. |
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