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So It Seems
Contributed by
Elf
on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:41:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Time ticks by
as I sit and I cry
about nothing, everything,
wishing I'd die.
I've got nothing to live for.
I hurt to my core.
I can't take this pain.
I can't take anymore.
I have'nt a doubt
my time's running out.
I've seen my future;
what it's about.
You won't see me here,
but have no fear.
I won't leave.
I'll always be near.
I'll haunt your dreams
by any means.
You pushed me all the way to death.
Or so it seems.
for those who've caused me so much anger and pain
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-10-24 20:41:01]
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Re: So It Seems
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:59:17 PM AEST
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| wow this was extrodinary!!! your words are amazing the way they flow ...wow this is a awsome poem i love it the ryming is great!!! |
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Re: So It Seems
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:11:05 PM AEST
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| amazing write. very nice. |
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Re: So It Seems
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 12:51:01 AM AEST
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| A hauntingly flowing write, visual and intense full of emtional anger, overflowing with stressfree realease, a cool poem to read. |
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