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Empty Thoughts... Empty Dreams
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:09:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She carries those empty thoughts inside her head
And those empty dreams...
Well... they're already dead
Crushed by the poisonious words
Spoken by some cruel... heartless person with no concern
For the mess her life had become
All the heartache and pain without love
Living... breathing... dying inside
With those empty thoughts and empty dreams
Still haunting her mind
Once... they may have meant something to her
Now... they're just useless... hollowed out schemes
Those empty thoughts and empty dreams
Never to be fully realized
Because someone was blind by their own shortsightedness
Couldn't recognize the signs of someone
Whose pain was eating them alive
Just left them in a pool of emotion to die
"Go ahead..." they said... " Just do it! And do the world a favor!"
I just don't agree with that philosophy
If that person was in that situation... is that what they would want...?
Someone badgering them to just do it
While they're pleading for help?
I don't think so...
She's reaching out as best she can
The only only way she knows how...
For someone to just take her by the hand
And rescue her from herself and her pain
For which she feels is driving her insane
She carries those empty thoughts inside her head
And those empty dreams...
Well... they're already dead
Cushed by those vile words spoken
And driving her toward the edge
To be lost forever... drowning in the great pond of life
A pool of her own blood...
Seeping through the cracks of time
All because... she carried those empty thoughts inside her head...
Because her life had treated her as though she were dead...
Meaning nothing to anyone... not even herself...
An empty dream is all she lived on...
Until it was gone...
Because someone.. couldn't show compassion for their fellow man
She died... by her own hand
Full of empty thoughts and empty dreams
That's how she lived her life it seemed...
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Re: Empty Thoughts... Empty Dreams
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:14:39 PM AEST
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| amazing and brilliant write. you presented this excellently. it definantly will get your point across. |
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Re: Empty Thoughts... Empty Dreams
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by emystar on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:20:43 PM AEST
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Sad but written well.
I'm so proud of u for taking time out to help others. I'm sure u know there's not much more joy than knowing u helped a lost soul by jus taking time out to listen to their pain and write aabout it.
Couldn't find what I was looking for but this is even mo better.
Keep up the good work 'cause we all need someone that listens and can be felt in your heart.
People that tell such things as u called out in this write will have blood on their hands when.
So proud of u.
luv, huggs,
yo momma,
emy |
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Re: Empty Thoughts... Empty Dreams
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:51:35 AM AEST
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| this is so gud, i love it!!!! |
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Re: Empty Thoughts... Empty Dreams
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 03:59:28 PM AEST
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this was achingly beautiful and written with
such tenderness. Words can never do this
poem justice or express the thoughts and
emotions this poem brought up.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Empty Thoughts... Empty Dreams
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by alliecat on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:00:55 PM AEST
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| you have a real way with words....you express yourself really well....good write |
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Re: Empty Thoughts... Empty Dreams
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 05:54:33 PM AEST
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| wow...VERY well written..Love it. |
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Re: Empty Thoughts... Empty Dreams
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:20:25 PM AEST
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| This is such a sad write. I applaud you for speaking up on this situation. Sometimes, people don't take the time to realise how fragile life can be. Very good write indeed. *S* Cynthia |
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