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Look at me
Contributed by
caughtinadream
on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:44:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Look at me
I am everything I never wanted to be.
Is this true? Is this real?
I dont understand the way I feel.
I am here, bounded by my own pride.
It seems like nowadays just living is suicide.
I want to move on, to finally be content
Instead of facing this everyday torment.
I pray to God that I will be okay
Please give me the strength to live each day.
I've come so far, I can't lose my love
For my sanity I place nothing above.
Copyright ©
caughtinadream
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2004-10-24 19:44:36]
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Re: Look at me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:08:25 PM AEST
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| holy crap! This is an awsome poem! well wrroded, great flow, but best of all, I can feel it because I have been there so many times! Great Job! |
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Re: Look at me
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:26:43 PM AEST
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| amazing write. i hope you cant sleep more often =] |
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Re: Look at me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:58:50 AM AEST
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| this is great! i love it! ezacly how i feel!!! |
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Re: Look at me
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:02:44 PM AEST
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i liked this alot...great write...awesome job
Lots of Love
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