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Bleed without reason
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:55:06 PM in AEST
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Descending into depression - losing focus on those around me.
I want to scream, I want to bash my head against this wall until I feel nothing more of this. I want to sleep, I want to sleep until I can awake to something new.
God, I don't want to die, I just want to sleep.
God, I don't want to die, I just want to scream.
I want the door to stay shut and I never want to know what's on the other side.
I'm going to sit here and cry until I cry tears of blood, I want to cry until someone realises that I'm hurting. I want to hurt until all of this blood turns to ice and the ice melts away and I am me no more.
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Re: Bleed without reason
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:36:11 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Bleed without reason
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by iluvpencils on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:54:23 PM AEST
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I loved this. You might want to reconsider the phrasing but I still loved it.
I could completely grasp and understand you emotions. I've felt that way so many times before...where you don't want to die but just want everything to go away and stop feeling. I felt that way today actually lol. Thank you for putting it into words.
Best wishes,
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Re: Bleed without reason
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:56:03 PM AEST
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| wow amazin poem very deep and emotional i loved it |
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Re: Bleed without reason
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 05:00:54 AM AEST
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| this is awesome, i love it! |
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Re: Bleed without reason
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by Sirena_Degana on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:08:20 AM AEST
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so sad..good..
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: Bleed without reason
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by bonita2689 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:27:08 AM AEST
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| damn... I feel it too... p/m sometime |
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