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More Pressure From Here
Contributed by
Marcus493
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:21:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm not sure how to write this poem
But I wrote it twice...
My womans is MY misses
The only reason I expect sweet kisses
Like my number one investment
I keep her in the mint
Just cause to me she's a tenth
I never drop dimes
She could hate me tomorrow
Long as she love me today
We go through
My job don't help
Just cause the money don't grow
She say it's okay
Just don't understand
For me If I'm not making her happy
I'm not a goodman
That don't change a thang
See I deploy and ploy
That aint right
On my missions
Dont' have time to make love all-night
I fiigure we just share time for company
My heart be second guessin
Can't blame me because we have our faults
Won't go into the basics
It's just like she say I say
The words don't seperate
but still we apart
My heart can't take this
I wonder how she doing or where she been
Even if somewhere she found another man
Guess I've come down with a case
Been this way for weaks
My mind keep making my heart weak
Only because I thought I was strong
Picture me and her all night long
Some may criticize me for thinking
But that's my heart and my intention is to never part
Rather I be or we be
I guess it's a catch 22
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Marcus493
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2004-10-24 13:21:27]
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Re: More Pressure From Here
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by immortal_pain on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:59:27 PM AEST
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| that was really good *thumb up* i liked it ^_^ |
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Re: More Pressure From Here
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by emystar on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 03:52:43 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
I bet she's extrememly proud of u for doing what u have to do.
Hang in there friend. I know it's hard as I was once married to a millatary guy but I was 100% fatefull to him.
My son was in the Army too.
Good work and realize that true luv will never die.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
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