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Tears for the Living
Contributed by
TheVampireClaudia
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:26:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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The tears fall from my eyes,
And turn to pearls as they hit the ground,
Filling up my ocean of dreams;
Soon it will be full,
And I will be free to leave this wretched place
And live among the living yet again
And as the garnet sky
And amethyst moon,
Fly overhead,
I remember how I was
And will be again some day
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Re: Tears for the Living
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by macmcgovern on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:07:54 PM AEST
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I'd say, from a very well eductated 13 year old. Keep writing like this and your future will be bright indeed. This is extremely well done and creative . I throughly enjoyed reading and look forward to reading future creations. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Tears for the Living
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:11:51 PM AEST
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*agrees with mac*
yes, very well written. I love the metaphors you chose.
Keep it up, you've got talent!
~Breezy |
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Re: Tears for the Living
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:56:04 PM AEST
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beautifully written:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Tears for the Living
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by footiebabe on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:08:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful I love the amethyst moon stanza, very descriptive.
luv michelle
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Re: Tears for the Living
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by immortal_pain on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:23:14 PM AEST
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| very good ^_^ I liked it. if you ever need help just IM |
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Re: Tears for the Living
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by Apardame on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:11:12 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. From the way you write, it doesn't seem like your 13 years old. Keep up the good work!!! |
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Re: Tears for the Living
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by travisk on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:21:26 PM AEST
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| could feel the effort in it, but well done. The best stuff comes naturally. |
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