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Death by the sea
Contributed by
Kazzy1231
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:24:31 AM in AEST
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I stand by the sea.
It seems 2 be talking 2 me.
It's telling me I should drown mysef like I have always wanted 2 do.
I'm not sure if I really want 2 leave you.
But I can't stand life anymore.
Suddenly I fall 2 the floor.
I lie there not moving.
Not breathing.
At last I am dead.
The tide comes in and I get swept out 2 sea.
I slowly sink 2 the bottom of the sea.
This is finally the end of me.
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2004-10-24 11:24:31]
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Re: Death by the sea
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by immortal_pain on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:25:42 PM AEST
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| thats really sad. :( i would love to talk with you one day i know exactly how you feel. just PM me sometime... or bettre yet ill PM you ^_^ |
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Re: Death by the sea
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by travisk on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:18:18 PM AEST
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| just a question, why the 2's instead of to. |
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Re: Death by the sea
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 06:22:21 AM AEST
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| Because that's how I write to. |
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