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A message upon his desk
Contributed by
LostDream
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Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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I left a message upon his desk,
I wrote it with my finger blood,
he took it and smiled to me.
I posted my broken heart
to his address,
I went there to find out
if he got it.
His room's full of things
and here's his body,
on the bed,
surrounded by the pieces
of my broken heart.
His smile's bleeding
he's cutting his feelings
cause he doesn't want to love...
or he doesn't want to love me?
I drew a picture of the sea,
there were the sun,the clouds,everything.
I used the colours of his hair
I melt the tones of his eyes
I mixed the shadows of his smiles.
I made a masterpiece....
I love the way he doesn't know
he's a masterpiece:
the shyness and the voice
were so genuine and true!
Copyright ©
LostDream
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2002-11-17 11:00:00]
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Re: A message upon his desk
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 01:14:11 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful
it gave me a vision of art beyond
the imagination of love
Thanks for sharing this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: A message upon his desk
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 09:42:36 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful....love it..
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