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My Angel of Ruin
Contributed by
Deleterious_Dislike
on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:17:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The tunes, the tones are soothing
even if the words are bruising
Im so sick and tired of choosing
But I've gotten use to loosing
Never knew, words could hurt more than stones
Words of confusion, born from the unknowns
Now each letter is carved deep into my bones
Your spider webs have taken over our thrones
My Angel of Ruin
What are you doing?
There is no light showing
When once you were glowing
And I've no way of knowing
Where this is going
The pain is excruciating,
Ive had it up to here with waiting,
this suicide contemplating,
plus the god damned hesitating.
I didn't think, My heart could break in so many pieces.
I never knew it could shrink. watch as is decreases
no more damn bleeding, no more evil releases
No more of me
Goodbye
Im gone
My Angel of Ruin
What have you done?
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Re: My Angel of Ruin
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:31:30 AM AEST
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| Execellently composed, with so much feeling and painting visual images. |
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Re: My Angel of Ruin
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by emocutie07 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:20:27 AM AEST
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| Awesome write, I really like how you layed it out and expressed such emotion through your words...great job, cant wait to hear more from you |
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Re: My Angel of Ruin
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 04:00:34 AM AEST
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that was amazing. am really quite speechless.
brilliant! the way you write reminds me of a friend i had on this site who's left now. (that's a big compliment coz she was very talented)
keep posting, i'm already a fan! x |
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