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Contributed by
Saz
on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:31:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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As I am here thinking
I can feel myself sinking
Help me before it's too late
Help me if you're a true mate
A word here and there
A conversation to share
Please don't ignore me
I'm not invisable to see
And please don't let me fade out
You know me, you know what I'm about
Just being here, but not seeing
me, I too am a human being
Why do I feel so alone?
Even though I'm not on my own
I don't fit in, anywhere
With anyone, but you don't care
Copyright ©
Saz
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2004-10-24 07:31:59]
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Re: Help
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:14:23 AM AEST
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Men have no logic hun, you may have to slap it around his face for a while before he listens. Great write, it flowed together perfectly and the message was clear.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Help
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by DragonLuvSong on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:35:41 AM AEST
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| i think that is great. the message is right there, and i think it's written beautifully. maybe you need to speak the plea right now, becuase guys aren't always that swift... |
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