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*Snow*
Contributed by
footiebabe
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:06:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The cold glistening snow
When will it all go!!
People shiver as they pass by
The wind gives a howling cry
The ice is thick on the ground
And winter snow is all around
The snowflakes are shpaed in every style
I bet the snow will last a while
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2004-10-24 07:06:19]
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Re: *Snow*
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:07:51 AM AEST
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Aww this is cute, just think of all the snow men you can build... And hitting your friends with snow balls.
Take Care
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Re: *Snow*
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:10:24 AM AEST
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Hi Michelle
This is a very ggod poem, lots of descriptive words.
Mum is very proud **big smiles**
Love Dawny (aka Mum) |
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Re: *Snow*
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:03:28 AM AEST
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| Cold snow, like my heart, your poem was exceptional, beautiful visual images surronded by a the feeling you put into the poem cool write. |
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Re: *Snow*
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by AliB on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:56:35 AM AEST
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Hi Michelle!
Cool poem, very descriptive. Welcome to YPDC, keep writing, you are very good for a 9 year old.
Love Ali xx |
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Re: *Snow*
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by emocutie07 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:37:01 AM AEST
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| ahdorable write!! |
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Re: *Snow*
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:35:23 PM AEST
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I always hated when people said things about how young I was and compared my abilities to my age, but...
I've never seen a nine-year-old who wrote such observant things.
I really like this, keep up the good work!
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: *Snow*
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:42:26 PM AEST
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somehow me thinks you could have written this on the hottest summer's day and i would still have felt the anticipation of snowflakes on my tongue... hugs n' love nessa
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