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A Day At The Beach
Contributed by
footiebabe
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:01:15 AM in AEST
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A day at the beach
Sounds good to me
On the golden sand
A bucket in my hand
Swimming in the sea
Sounds good to me
Big blue waves
I like to sunbathe
Looking for shells
Sounds good to me
The crabs run away
I could stay here all day!!
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Re: A Day At The Beach
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:04:23 AM AEST
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Sounds good to me, sorry couldn't resist lol. I love this, its light and fun, if you know what I mean. Hope you had a good time
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: A Day At The Beach
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:12:58 AM AEST
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I dont remember you doing much sunbathing, you wouldn't come out of the water lol
Another good poem, I like the repetitive style of "sounds good to me"
Well done
Love Dawny (aka mum) |
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Re: A Day At The Beach
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:27:40 AM AEST
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| always loved the beach, swimming body boarding surfing, lol burning, that part hurt the most, but worth the golden tan, Awesome poem, reminded me of much I love the beach, cant wait for summer now, you have a beautiful talent for recreating past events and making them feel so real, cool poem, thanks for sharing so I may read. |
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Re: A Day At The Beach
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by AliB on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:58:57 AM AEST
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Hi Michelle,
Wow!! You're good at this aren't you? Another great poem, you got talent girly, keep up the good work.
Love Ali xx |
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Re: A Day At The Beach
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:37:42 PM AEST
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"whilst" that just cracked me up! hehehe what a breath of fresh air you are, Michelle.
I like this poem. Hope you get to the beach as often as it please you.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: A Day At The Beach
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:37:36 PM AEST
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your poetry is like a breath of fresh air, warm welcome to ypdc, i hope to read many more from you, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Day At The Beach
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 04:24:51 PM AEST
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Absolutely adorable write...... I love the beach too....and used to spend all day there when I was your age..My Mom used to bring us our Sunday lunch there...cuz we never wanted to come out to go home to eat...lol
Jenni |
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Re: A Day At The Beach
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by Trisha on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:07:07 AM AEST
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Yes. Lets Go To The Beach.
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Re: A Day At The Beach
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 09:08:51 AM AEST
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| Wow this is very good poem i love hte beach. |
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