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Lie Peacefully Together
Contributed by
unforgiven
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:36:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So nervous yet so ready,
Butterflies in the stomach,
Fluttering their wings in time,
To the pounding of my heart.
My heart and soul laid bare,
Each emotion on display,
Shown through my eyes,
That are staring into yours.
Knew this day would arrive,
Worried so endlessly,
Yet strangely with you,
I feel more ready than ever.
The day outside is cold and wet,
None of it seems to matter,
The only thing now important,
We're together, cozy inside.
For that short wonderful time,
It seems to me as if,
We are alone in the world,
Celebrating this love.
I know that it will end,
Eventually we'll be disrupted,
But for these moments now,
We can lie peacefully together.
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unforgiven
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Re: Lie Peacefully Together
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:40:38 AM AEST
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I know the feeling.. beautiful poem.. thanks for sharing.
Jane x |
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Re: Lie Peacefully Together
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:46:31 AM AEST
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| Beautiful and sensual, awesome write, a poem, with clear visual images, and feelings galore, cool poem. |
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Re: Lie Peacefully Together
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:06:50 AM AEST
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i don't believe love can exist in this world anymore
But what you're explaining in this poem seems close..
My eyes got teary through this |
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Re: Lie Peacefully Together
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 07:10:28 AM AEST
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Aww this is beautiful. I agree with Deleterious_Dislike, I didnt believe love existed anymore but you wrote down exactly what I believe it would be.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Lie Peacefully Together
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by Delusions on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 03:07:46 AM AEST
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| Hey space cadet! I liked this one alot... I like all of em alot... hehe but I like this one alot bcos it hit so close to home w/ me... I felt these exact feelings not so long ago... one moment in time where nothing else matters... it was one of the most amazing experiences ive ever had! love you muchly xox ~cRuNcHiE~ |
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