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Wonder Wonder
Contributed by
row
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:02:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Wonder Wonder
A blunder stund her
Crippled perfection
And I wonder
Why I sigh
I look at the sky
And upon the pedastool
where it seems you lie
Never Ever
Never Sever
Never left the words this clever
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row
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2004-10-24 06:02:11]
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Re: Wonder Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:05:08 AM AEST
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I had to read that four times, very good, definitly makes one think *grins*
Great Write
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Wonder Wonder
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by Stej on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 03:10:33 AM AEST
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| dude this is really clever and straight to the point...nice poem rowza |
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Re: Wonder Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:47:09 PM AEST
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I enjoy your work, the simplicity of it makes it all that more complex, because you get straight to the point. So the reader is left with fewer words to connect, but when they are it seems the words are bigger than their letters amount too. Keep writing.
--Raven Avenue-Gibson--
P.S. I absolutly adore your name. |
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