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Walking
Contributed by
Seikjo
on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 04:56:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Raining down blood.
Pooling on the rock ground.
Walking in the cold rain.
Wind blowing hair all ways.
No hope.
No chance left.
Walking in the cold rain.
Knife slashing every life force out.
Falling down on the rock road.
Blood pooling on the ground.
No hope.
No chance left.
Blood raining down upon cold body.
Screaming helpless person.
Copyright ©
Seikjo
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2004-10-24 04:56:27]
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Re: Walking
(User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 05:14:30 AM AEST
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| i liked this, your poem itself represented your feelings it came across very fragile nad delicate. |
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Re: Walking
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:10:50 AM AEST
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I like this one, powerful words and emotions practically roll off it. Great Write.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Walking
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:50:23 PM AEST
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| great exspration! i like it |
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