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Soul
Contributed by
Seikjo
on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 04:51:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Stranded.
Black.
Wandering.
Sad.
Bleak.
Dead.
Empty.
Tears.
Blood.
Running.
Falling.
Dieing.
Screaming.
Walking.
Spining.
Trying.
Yelling.
Killing.
Fading.
Turning.
Guning.
Dieing.
Dieing.
Dieing.
Empty.
Empty.
Empty.
Copyright ©
Seikjo
... [
2004-10-24 04:51:08]
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Re: Soul
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 05:08:33 AM AEST
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| Before i read this poem when i just took a peek. i thought i would not like it. because of the lack of description. but you have proved me wrong this was a pleasure to read. i like that you only used one word to exspress a whole feeling very clever. |
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Re: Soul
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:20:31 AM AEST
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This has left me speechless. I didnt know it was possible to get so many feelings and pictures from so few words. I've never seen a poem like this before, and I hope to see many, many more.
Excellent!
Take Care
- Becca |
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