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broken mirror
Contributed by
oneteartofellpain
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 03:28:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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last night i stood in the restroom
i sat n looked to all the four walls which have been there when no one else has
i cried like a child...
a child i am not...
looking into my self...
i couldnt stand my image...
to think how badly i could hurt myself
how soon i can dance with death
how soon i can let myself go into the hands of the one..
how soon i can end my pain
broken shatted pieces of mirror layed all around me
i couldnt stand my image...
i thought of the pain
thought of it comming inside my skin
the burning sensation ive selt before
i could see the bloob flowing the same trail it always does
before i knew it...i no longer saw my image
all i saw was my lifeless body laying to the piece of mirror which took my image.
i no longer hurt.
i no longer bled
i no longer cry...
for now that image has faded forever
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2004-10-24 03:28:13]
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Re: broken mirror
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:31:55 AM AEST
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This is really good, I like how you set it out and you've used strong words to portray a sensitive image.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: broken mirror
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by emocutie07 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:15:41 AM AEST
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| Very good write, really made me feel what the character was going through with strong words, and emotions |
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Re: broken mirror
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by immortal_pain on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:25:25 PM AEST
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| i loved it! very very touching. made me think vegly of myself. |
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Re: broken mirror
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by immortal_pain on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:25:53 PM AEST
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| ohh yes i forgot, yu can PM me anytime you need someone to talk to.^_^ |
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