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like a gentle rain

Contributed by ladyfawn on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:52:38 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

un ange tombé peut être sauvé par l'amour...
a fallen angel may be saved by love...

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when seeing dark clouds looking into the sky
his calming voice simply makes me sigh,
recently blessed; our newfound start
still knowing how to warm my heart,

aye, he is a wealth of inspiration to me
when here i thought; dried has the sea,
miles away yet whispering in my ear
things become crystal clear,

no matter how closed in; he opens the vault
he warms my heart,'tis not his fault,
bringing such muchly needed comfort
in any wicked storm; my port,

bringing sunshine's warmth again unto my soul
two parts together making a whole,
rushing heart lighter; feeling hopeful again
flowing over my soul,

like a gentle rain.

§* *§
*|*

Copyright Â© ladyfawn ... [ 2004-10-24 01:52:38]
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Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:10:28 AM AEST
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Dearest Nessa..just now I have seen our comments on my latest submission about my mother..after reading your comment I could not control my self..tears flowed on my face..though I am not in a mood to comment on any poem..but your poem dragged me in..and it is like a gentle rain wonderfully refreshing to my poetic heart..thank you for sharing..thank you for commenting on my poem..hugs and love as a friend...I will come back after a week to read the poetry of all my friends ...sincrely..
your ...venkat

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:12:46 AM AEST
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Oh Ness, mom, this is so beautiful. I havent got a clue what the thingy says in your author notes... Heh.

The picture and the Music both fit together perfectly but seeing you write like this again is wonderful! I love this hun, s'one of my favourites :o)

Hugs 'n Lotsa loves
- Your daughter

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:23:56 AM AEST
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Ah yes Ladyfawn that sweet gentle rain that washes away all trials and tribulations until the soul is at one with the body again. Some may never know that gentle rain or its benefits. I am so glad that you have found it for yourself. Hugs from bernard.

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by outsider on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 03:02:45 AM AEST
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Very very nice write and full of feeling, I enjoyed reading this

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:13:08 AM AEST
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Wonderful Poem, It reads like the title. Like a gentle rain............Mike

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:31:16 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem, intriguing and mstical, heart warming and sensual, outstanding as always, you have once again mezmerised me totally.

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:44:58 AM AEST
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This is an amzing poem.. the picture and sounds all fits properly on the poem.

Jane x

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:18:38 AM AEST
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The picture and the music compliment the words beautifully.

A wonderful poem

love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:28:14 AM AEST
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just lovely nessa. hope its true and u r back together

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:32:49 AM AEST
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Oh Ness..what a beautiful piece....

"bringing sunshine's warmth again unto my soul
two parts together making a whole,"

This leaves me with such a warm feeling..
Hugs and Luv
Jenni

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:24:31 PM AEST
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Nessa, as always your words captivate both heart and soul.
You write so beautifully. And your music and picture choices
add to the emotion and enjoyment of the read.
Superb. Again.

*hugs*
~Breezy

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:28:28 PM AEST
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This is beautiful..what more can someone say?
I know how refreshing rain feels and also how it feels
when the sun dries up that rain..Living in the desert I have become a cactus and try to absorb the water and keep it in..not working right now I'm afraid....still jealous of your abiity with the computer and midi's..lol. Rock On :-*)

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 03:10:06 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written maam.Your words set the romantic heart awash upon the vastness of love..Beautiful...Russ

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:15:30 AM AEST
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Wonderful, simply wonderful... So full of hope... An immense joy to read this...
Hugs,
Hur

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:17:24 AM AEST
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You really have an eye for the beautiful, great write.

johnny.

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 07:29:05 PM AEST
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A gentle rain that brings a gentle cleansing...
This is a beautiful poem that entails a gentle spirit. There is a softness and moving quality that causes one to gently sigh.

A beautiful write
Willofree

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 03:45:47 PM AEST
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Everything about it from the title to
the last word is absolutely
beautiful.

--Mothy

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:16:12 PM AEST
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Nessa, what a touching write. stunningly beautiful my dear friend. *S* Cynthia

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:37:11 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of heavenly beaty like a gntle rain.
Very good work my dear friend.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
The picture is awesome too.

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 01:54:35 PM AEST
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As always you are clever at your art and attentive with the pen, I applaud this work you have done.

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Alovinmann on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 03:43:39 PM AEST
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So move on back Kisses

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:54:50 PM AEST
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Warm write nessa, it soothed my soul. :)

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 05:25:25 PM AEST
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I dont know if there is anyone who writes as beautifully as you. Such soft love......a sigh...

Roses, red and vibrant
Larry

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:58:24 PM AEST
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such sentiments of love and hope - a truly beautiful poem that says love is alive in the hearts of those who seek it

Hugs n Love Sis

Merry

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:31:56 PM AEST
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"like a gentle rain".... what a beautifully touching last line.

Awwww Nessa.... you almost didn't need to say that you are feeling hopeful again. This piece so clearly communicates that and it is so very nice to see.

Lovely,
SNM

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:29:33 PM AEST
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Such a deep uplifting write. I can see why you get so many comments you put yourself into your works. The music went perfectly along with this write. "GREAT JOB"

~~DENNIS~~

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:12:40 AM AEST
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Hiya girlfriend! Long time-no see!!!!!
I pop in and here this poem sits in awesome
splendor!!! The old saying is true eh? Hope springs eternal??? Beautifully crafted flowing emotion!!! Nessa at her finest....when hope is ever present!!!!
(((((Nessa))))))
Angel always... Joni 0-)

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:02:39 AM AEST
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What a fresh breeze of air you brought into this. An exceptional delightful breathtaking write. Great topic warming the heart. You have created a lovely picture.
5/5
Corinna

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:41:21 AM AEST
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awwwww so lovely!
What a wonderful write! You are so lucky to that inspiration in your life. Cherish it (him) always.

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:55:15 PM AEST
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This evokes feelings of the gentle fingers of rain all warm and soft and light. Loved it.
Stitch

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:14:36 PM AEST
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Very beautiful and awesome. I love it!

Spazzo

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:55:25 PM AEST
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Aww! Lovely write. I loved it! I really liked the music :-)

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:58:21 PM AEST
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your work puts many poets to shame.

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by OnAngelswings on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:49:14 PM AEST
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Nessa....this absolutely wonderful...your writting makes me feel what I am reading...thats something special you have....your writtings are inspiring to others....Shari :)

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 06:56:40 PM AEST
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*****no matter how closed in; he opens the vault
he warms my heart,'tis not his fault,
bringing such muchly needed comfort
in any wicked storm; my port,

Thank you for this poem. It is peaceful, soothing, as is the title..

Raquel Leah

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by manbeast on Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 12:47:29 AM AEST
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nice job of honoring the muse

Re: like a gentle rain (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Tuesday, 15th July 2014 @ 04:25:36 PM AEST
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so beautifull

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