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Take me away
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:13:26 AM in AEST
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Everything I loved and cared about
Was taken from me
So I left without a second thought
Being alone was meant to be
All I wanted to do was shout
I only came back for her
She was the only thing good in my life
That wasn't taken away
I was to take her as my wife
But she wanted to stay
The road I was on was cold and foggy
I dropped to my knees and yelled
Oh god take me away
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Re: Take me away
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by kyletycz on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:56:04 AM AEST
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nice write, it gets the point across quite well, and it is also short and sweet
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Re: Take me away
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:47:46 AM AEST
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A very emotional poem, i really like this alot.
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Re: Take me away
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:14:36 AM AEST
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| Exceelnt poem, sensitive and full of feeling, cool write enjoyed it. |
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