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Christmas Shopping (Tanka)
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 10:09:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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Running in circles
in and out of the aisles
we need traffic lights
to calm down this busy crowd
long line at the lay away.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Oct.20/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-10-23 22:09:33]
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Re: Christmas Shopping (Tanka)
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 10:13:00 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Cynthia..You do these so well..
Hugs
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Re: Christmas Shopping (Tanka)
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 09:29:32 AM AEST
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| Thats why I do my christmas shopping a month early, lol though not allways cheaper it is always less stressful, cool poem a wonder and privilage to read, most enjoyable, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Christmas Shopping (Tanka)
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:49:59 PM AEST
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arg is right lol, i dont think about xmas until black friday:P great write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Christmas Shopping (Tanka)
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by emystar on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:06:38 PM AEST
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Very good work. I agree with Jenni, u do these so well.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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