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stay out
Contributed by
Gimpie
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Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:45:40 PM in AEST
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Why are people curious?
Why do they read my work?
They never understand
And often act like jerks
To understand my train of thought
Just open up your eyes
My feelings are bluntly written
Just look upon each line
I'm not some psycho person
Though I'm not a perfect saint
I rest somewhere between
Though the lines are often faint
So he says I make him wonder
Or she says I cause her fright
Just remember you can close this
While I think each day and night.
Copyright ©
Gimpie
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2004-10-23 20:45:40]
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Re: stay out
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:06:23 PM AEST
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i would write a really creepy one with their names in it and leave the notebook easy for them to reach lol, great write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: stay out
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by Kericka on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 09:17:07 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem, I really like it. I got mad about people reading my stuff, and tired of them making fun of what I write, and etc. etc., so I wrote a little something, but I can't post it because it has a little bit of profanity, but you'd probably relate to it. Keep writing, and hey, don't end up like me, waking up to my nightmares, and only wishing to go back to sleep to my peaceful dreams. |
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Re: stay out
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:29:57 AM AEST
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| wow this is a awsome poem i love it |
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Re: stay out
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:57:06 AM AEST
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| Loved this. My favorite lines--JUST REMEMBER YOU CAN CLOSE THIS WHILE I THINK EACH DAY AND NIGHT. I can so relate to that! My mind is hardly ever quiet, always tons of stuff going on in there. Much peace to you. |
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Re: stay out
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by Stoney1 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:18:32 AM AEST
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Your reply,"She who steals my poem book,
steals trash, but she who has stolen my poem
book has wrought a great injury upon her own
good name...and is liable to get her face pushed
in!"
Lifted from Bill Shakespeare and revised to
fit the occasion.*g*
Stoney
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