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Blues in Love Minor
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:44:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She'd smile for awhile,
and talk till I fell asleep
to dream of her,
and be together.
All she wanted was to be loved,
or at least she thought she did.
And maybe I was too tame for her.
Not enough like her old life
to give her a new one.
Maybe she loved him too much.
Enough to forsake me,
for him.
All I ever wanted was to fly.
To escape my bonds and suburban life,
and find what I wanted all along,
a home where my heart is.
We'd drive together in her car,
and lie together in my room,
and I was free.
It was everything I'd ever wanted it to be.
Until she went home.
Where her heart was.
The whole time she was with me.
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CodyJ
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2004-10-23 20:44:20]
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Re: Blues in Love Minor
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by Gimpie on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 08:47:39 PM AEST
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| Very sad, but a very good write. I'm sorry she left. |
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Re: Blues in Love Minor
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by Always on
Monday, 7th January 2008 @ 08:06:56 PM AEST
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| sucks when hearts are never where you want them to be eh. |
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